Self Evidence

The Best rhymes and rhythm I have seen on this website!

Wow! That is high praise indeed! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I keep getting back and back to this poem. The presentation is so witty. The words choice is so original and unexpected, not typical at all, always bringing surprise. Also, I agree so much with what's been said. People... with their talent to make complete b*llshit sound right, just because they want to be right. So much negativity and simple truth becomes invisible to pretense and ego. Personally, I am a person that can get easily confused by oral attacks and due to my sensitivity, life is often a nightmare, just because facts get covered so well, normalised in a society, especially via guilt. Also, just to add, people say dont play the victim to actual victims. Who are usually mild people that get bullied. It is exactly bullies that victimize and pretend to be the suffering ones, always making themselves seem hurt or misunderstood. "Don't play the victim" always say the negative ones that want to praise other strong personalities capable to withstand their fight, while diminishing those that just don't know how to defend themselves. To be honest, good is good, bad is bad, everyone knows this, but through being b*tthurt and arrogant, truth gets silenced, while it is so easy to comprehend. Until the day where bad things are normalised and stereotyped until good looks funny, weak, crazy or whatever. I hope that facts will sooner expose mass lies and the idiocy of humankinds' priorities and things that it praises. But maybe facts will triumph when this Earth ceases to be. however, let's not end this on the pessimistic tone, hopefully, it will work out at the end of the day, as a fact is a fact, no matter how much you try to hide it. I could add other things but they would be very specific and I don't want to add some of my own beliefs to the comment.
also, please make sure to reply to messages and not add a new message, when replying to someone, otherwise they won't get a notification, I saw mine just because I visited the poem quite a few times afterwards.

I spent three years working in a rehab for teenage boys, and walked away from the experience more convinced than ever that the neurological characteristics our culture has traditionally deemed unsavory are really just squandered potential. Take ADHD for example, this is really just a renaming of something we use to call being scatterbrained. Applied with foresight it is a character "flaw" that is actually a talent in disguise, only needing an opportunity to bloom in favorable soil, so to speak. Poetry is that soil for so many folks, such as yourself, and the only real barrier is the free time we need to work on it. It will help being in fellowship with like minded folks such as we see here at DU. Stay positive!  

Also, the words you used are both complicated as a choice that leaves an original impression but easy to grasp. This is a talent, indeed. For people don't really want to stumble upon the same phrases again and again, but sometimes overcomplicating makes it difficult to read further. With you, it seems that you are capable to narrate like an erudite but in an accessible way.
I also write in a similar way, however, I do overcomplicate at times.

The combination of "low brow" with "high brow" language is a challenge even for native language practitioners, but I think that's what makes it so much fun, especially for folks who have a wide range of experiences to call upon for new linguistic combinations. The results leave a unique poetic signature for each poet.