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AspergerPoet56
Forum Posts: 1889
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 4th Dec 2018Forum Posts: 1889
28/30
Endless Battles
that endless
knife edge
clear sharp line
unsteady
baggage makes
it a more
difficult gamble
survival guide
unreadable
challenging
consequences
an unescapable
fact remsains
here in the
darkness i exist
equilibrium never
achieved
such battles
fought over years
feeling guilt
for still being alive
my execution
greatly exaggerated
head just
above water
sharks circling
smelling blood
trusting nature
not to bite
eventually leaving
me alone
Unique Words 65
Endless Battles
that endless
knife edge
clear sharp line
unsteady
baggage makes
it a more
difficult gamble
survival guide
unreadable
challenging
consequences
an unescapable
fact remsains
here in the
darkness i exist
equilibrium never
achieved
such battles
fought over years
feeling guilt
for still being alive
my execution
greatly exaggerated
head just
above water
sharks circling
smelling blood
trusting nature
not to bite
eventually leaving
me alone
Unique Words 65
ClovenTongue34
Nathaniel Peter
Forum Posts: 137
Nathaniel Peter
Thought Provoker
7
Joined 20th Mar 2023Forum Posts: 137
28/30
As To Swallow or Choke Upon My Pride?
Confrontations of allegations and I silently take the heat
Tension to regurgitation on the pages of this self defeat
Redirecting the rage in a therapy of laying it all to rest
I write to ease the suffering I endure in this life comprised of stress
Disarm the mind of my emotions when logic dictates silence
As I conduct warfare in my prayers to relinquish the will for violence
Choosing joy irrespective of the circumstance
Arsenals unseen, another attack, another battle, learning how to dance
Satisfy my want to be understood by starving the need
When everyone exploits your wounds the scars within still bleed
I find defense in surrender when I choose to be the bigger man
For the sake of arguments unspoken to withstand
Nothing to prove when ranks can get away with murder of the soul
I just stay in my lane for all the things I can’t control
Finding solace in knowing everyone gets what’s coming to their door
I find confidence and yet I fear when I think of my own failures all the more
Humility to reshape perspective with hands clasped to the means
I bide my time till the reckoning and choose to make no scenes
In this world that wills for drama when I’m just trying to get along
Self control is not for the faint of heart but for the strong…
As To Swallow or Choke Upon My Pride?
Confrontations of allegations and I silently take the heat
Tension to regurgitation on the pages of this self defeat
Redirecting the rage in a therapy of laying it all to rest
I write to ease the suffering I endure in this life comprised of stress
Disarm the mind of my emotions when logic dictates silence
As I conduct warfare in my prayers to relinquish the will for violence
Choosing joy irrespective of the circumstance
Arsenals unseen, another attack, another battle, learning how to dance
Satisfy my want to be understood by starving the need
When everyone exploits your wounds the scars within still bleed
I find defense in surrender when I choose to be the bigger man
For the sake of arguments unspoken to withstand
Nothing to prove when ranks can get away with murder of the soul
I just stay in my lane for all the things I can’t control
Finding solace in knowing everyone gets what’s coming to their door
I find confidence and yet I fear when I think of my own failures all the more
Humility to reshape perspective with hands clasped to the means
I bide my time till the reckoning and choose to make no scenes
In this world that wills for drama when I’m just trying to get along
Self control is not for the faint of heart but for the strong…
SatInUGal
Kumar
Forum Posts: 940
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
25
Joined 31st Dec 2015Forum Posts: 940
27/30
EXPERIENCE POINTS
What did I do
To the neighbor’s dog
To make it bark at me
So furiously
For months on end
Stole peace of mind
Made me take
Dark thoughts seriously
Today I find
A pork chop bone
Not two feet from
The property line
Tossed it over
And cast a spell
Of silence round
This porch of mine
(50 uw)
EXPERIENCE POINTS
What did I do
To the neighbor’s dog
To make it bark at me
So furiously
For months on end
Stole peace of mind
Made me take
Dark thoughts seriously
Today I find
A pork chop bone
Not two feet from
The property line
Tossed it over
And cast a spell
Of silence round
This porch of mine
(50 uw)
Thetravelingfairy
Forum Posts: 286
Fire of Insight
15
Joined 12th July 2017 Forum Posts: 286
27/30
Desert Uprising
Like desert sand
I washed away,
into a basin of a foreign past life
fossils and volcanic rocks eroded on hillsides are a subtle reminder of what was
A testament, and a warning perhaps
Should waters rise again…
Quartz and shells awaken, in the shadow of the monsoon
Can you smell the storm that eclipses this dry horizon?
March bloom is over, the tourists are gone
But this feeling I’ve held, will soon erupt once more, flooding the dunes with this heavy water I’ve suppressed for far too long.
Desert Uprising
Like desert sand
I washed away,
into a basin of a foreign past life
fossils and volcanic rocks eroded on hillsides are a subtle reminder of what was
A testament, and a warning perhaps
Should waters rise again…
Quartz and shells awaken, in the shadow of the monsoon
Can you smell the storm that eclipses this dry horizon?
March bloom is over, the tourists are gone
But this feeling I’ve held, will soon erupt once more, flooding the dunes with this heavy water I’ve suppressed for far too long.
Razzerleaf
Forum Posts: 524
Fire of Insight
27
Joined 15th Sep 2019 Forum Posts: 524
28/30
A night at the opera
The one eyed entrance packed out
an octopus lobby,
thinning out through its tentacles,
ink black suits and glittering gowns
kissing and sitting down
as the pit tunes up beneath the tragedy.
Feathers and pointed shoes
flap their bright plumage
against silk scarfs and white cravats,
my council estate hands
hide away tattoos
as the coal dust collar tightens.
Wide eyelids flood in moments
of pure recitative brilliance,
a clarity that snatches my lost emotions,
unnerved by raw experience,
I flow with the red eyed staircase
feeling as a child that has witnessed
something he ought not of.
A night at the opera
The one eyed entrance packed out
an octopus lobby,
thinning out through its tentacles,
ink black suits and glittering gowns
kissing and sitting down
as the pit tunes up beneath the tragedy.
Feathers and pointed shoes
flap their bright plumage
against silk scarfs and white cravats,
my council estate hands
hide away tattoos
as the coal dust collar tightens.
Wide eyelids flood in moments
of pure recitative brilliance,
a clarity that snatches my lost emotions,
unnerved by raw experience,
I flow with the red eyed staircase
feeling as a child that has witnessed
something he ought not of.
Josh
Joshua Bond
Forum Posts: 1793
Joshua Bond
Tyrant of Words
41
Joined 2nd Feb 2017Forum Posts: 1793
28/30
ANTI-WHATEVERISM
We must stop Anti-whateverism
those abusing power must be protected —
Support Authoritarianism!
The right to free speech? That’s Anarchism!
Isms make the masses infected
we must stop Anti-whateverism.
Peaceful protestors? Should be in prison!
They have warped minds which must be corrected
Support Authoritarianism!
Holding a silent vigil? That’s Snobbism!
These old freedoms ought to be suspected
We must stop Anti-whateverism.
Born to rule, proven by Darwinism
any questioning must be vivisected.
Support Authoritarianism!
Local Vocalism is vandalism
violent crackdowns must be expected
we must stop Anti-whateverism …
Support Authoritarianism!
ANTI-WHATEVERISM
We must stop Anti-whateverism
those abusing power must be protected —
Support Authoritarianism!
The right to free speech? That’s Anarchism!
Isms make the masses infected
we must stop Anti-whateverism.
Peaceful protestors? Should be in prison!
They have warped minds which must be corrected
Support Authoritarianism!
Holding a silent vigil? That’s Snobbism!
These old freedoms ought to be suspected
We must stop Anti-whateverism.
Born to rule, proven by Darwinism
any questioning must be vivisected.
Support Authoritarianism!
Local Vocalism is vandalism
violent crackdowns must be expected
we must stop Anti-whateverism …
Support Authoritarianism!
brokentitanium
k.
Forum Posts: 1198
k.
Tyrant of Words
12
Joined 18th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 1198
28/30
Pay the damn rent
Hey! Are you still here??
I thought I had kicked you out.
I only let you in
because you came with such a
huge advance
You didn’t mind the mess
or the leaks in the roof
I said ‘take it as it is’
and you said ‘I love it’
But now the rent is way past due
and still you linger
taking up space
on my mental couch
You lounge in silence
and I can’t relax
thinking maybe if I mop the floor
you’ll finally pay up
But those muddy bootprints
you left on my soul
keep rising to the surface
with every wordless glance
You say the cost is too high
that you don’t have the cash
well, that sounds like a YOU problem
The lease was clear
conditions were not met
now I need that space
so I can breathe
Pay the damn rent
Hey! Are you still here??
I thought I had kicked you out.
I only let you in
because you came with such a
huge advance
You didn’t mind the mess
or the leaks in the roof
I said ‘take it as it is’
and you said ‘I love it’
But now the rent is way past due
and still you linger
taking up space
on my mental couch
You lounge in silence
and I can’t relax
thinking maybe if I mop the floor
you’ll finally pay up
But those muddy bootprints
you left on my soul
keep rising to the surface
with every wordless glance
You say the cost is too high
that you don’t have the cash
well, that sounds like a YOU problem
The lease was clear
conditions were not met
now I need that space
so I can breathe
Tallen
earth_empath
Forum Posts: 2307
earth_empath
Tyrant of Words
34
Joined 15th Oct 2018Forum Posts: 2307
28/30
Fatuous illation
Damn Nesting Owls won’t shut up so I can think!
& now the Cooper’s Hawks are awake!
Difficult to spit out Day 28’s poem
all this racket goin’ on just outside my door
Don’t get me wrong, as I do adore
them Bird’s of Prey
the sounds they make
the rodent control
but the din early in the morning
when I am trying to think?!
Great
Now ALL the Birds are awake!
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
60 unique words
Fatuous illation
Damn Nesting Owls won’t shut up so I can think!
& now the Cooper’s Hawks are awake!
Difficult to spit out Day 28’s poem
all this racket goin’ on just outside my door
Don’t get me wrong, as I do adore
them Bird’s of Prey
the sounds they make
the rodent control
but the din early in the morning
when I am trying to think?!
Great
Now ALL the Birds are awake!
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
60 unique words
28 of 30
yanking the rug
I've got no problem with ownership
but I'm no longer willing...
to carry the weight of some bogus shit
when it comes to my own actions...
I take full responsibility
recognizing healing & reparations...
are entirely up to me
it's not as hard as people like to believe
saying those 2 little words...
I'm sorry
{I'll even accept my bad...}
but where I draw the line
...absolutely refuse to rise to the bait...
is when others expect me
to cover their ass
take on board the onus
...for their own crap
was a time I accepted every problem was mine
whenever someone was cruel to me
or treated me with disrespect
...it was me that apologized
{just suck it up buttercup
...how often did I hear that...}
until I understood the reality of their expectations
the belief that they somehow had immunity
one too many times...
of hearing the same reply
whenever I protested their behavior
oh come on...
stop being so sensitive
you know I didn't mean it
their attitude so filled with disgust
that I'd have the audacity to object
to the way they hurt me
dropping their heavy load at my feet
blame shifters...
it suddenly struck me
with a strong stench of hypocrisy
I know for a fact if I did it back
there would be an outraged attack
...ironic that...
the result of this realization
was my refusal to pick it back up
...allowing them another free pass
from now on I've got a better idea
my shoulders are tired
...of lugging what they try to pile on
I'll carry the burdens belonging to me...
...they can deal with what's their responsibility
what was that frequently uttered phrase...
...oh yes...
suck it up buttercup
take accountability
stop trying to sweep it under somebody else's rug
yanking the rug
I've got no problem with ownership
but I'm no longer willing...
to carry the weight of some bogus shit
when it comes to my own actions...
I take full responsibility
recognizing healing & reparations...
are entirely up to me
it's not as hard as people like to believe
saying those 2 little words...
I'm sorry
{I'll even accept my bad...}
but where I draw the line
...absolutely refuse to rise to the bait...
is when others expect me
to cover their ass
take on board the onus
...for their own crap
was a time I accepted every problem was mine
whenever someone was cruel to me
or treated me with disrespect
...it was me that apologized
{just suck it up buttercup
...how often did I hear that...}
until I understood the reality of their expectations
the belief that they somehow had immunity
one too many times...
of hearing the same reply
whenever I protested their behavior
oh come on...
stop being so sensitive
you know I didn't mean it
their attitude so filled with disgust
that I'd have the audacity to object
to the way they hurt me
dropping their heavy load at my feet
blame shifters...
it suddenly struck me
with a strong stench of hypocrisy
I know for a fact if I did it back
there would be an outraged attack
...ironic that...
the result of this realization
was my refusal to pick it back up
...allowing them another free pass
from now on I've got a better idea
my shoulders are tired
...of lugging what they try to pile on
I'll carry the burdens belonging to me...
...they can deal with what's their responsibility
what was that frequently uttered phrase...
...oh yes...
suck it up buttercup
take accountability
stop trying to sweep it under somebody else's rug
Kinkwizard_95
Forum Posts: 65
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 21st Feb 2024Forum Posts: 65
#28
Show of life
You’re here to watch the show of life
Please step up into the round
Spotlights bright, curtain call
Are you ready to perform?
Throw on this costume
Read out these lines
Pose like this whilst you do
Show me your persons
Enact your truth
Reveal your inner world
Silhouette disguising
Story enticing
Mesmerising
Enchanting tales
An eclectic collection of
Trials and tribulations
Moments and undulations
What is this ride we call life?
Unique word count: 60
Show of life
You’re here to watch the show of life
Please step up into the round
Spotlights bright, curtain call
Are you ready to perform?
Throw on this costume
Read out these lines
Pose like this whilst you do
Show me your persons
Enact your truth
Reveal your inner world
Silhouette disguising
Story enticing
Mesmerising
Enchanting tales
An eclectic collection of
Trials and tribulations
Moments and undulations
What is this ride we call life?
Unique word count: 60
theblackbird
Forum Posts: 33
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 30th Mar 2024 Forum Posts: 33
28/30
dammit, janet
I’ve given too much thought to how I would die --
Since leaving,
It's inevitable --
Stepping out into the open
Opened
A million ways, possibilities for the end --
Last week, I was rad-sick,
Now, I'm a group of raiders'
Captive.
This is day 3.
The rope has rubbed my skin raw,
Burning with every breath, every twitch --
But it's so close,
So close to fraying,
Freeing me --
Or at least
Giving me
A chance.
"Choice meat," they said --
Someone,
Something they would eat
Out, and then
Eat.
I’ve given too much fucking thought to how I would die --
I eyed my hurting ankle,
Told myself it was nothing --
Glared at the left behind shrapnel,
'Tis but a scratch,
As I scratched
The rope again against
Concrete --
Control the
Spiraling,
Why
Are
The tin cans
Chiming,
Bullets ri-
The door crashed open --
Sweet salvation.
A big sigh.
"Dammit, Janet."
I gave him a smile.
dammit, janet
I’ve given too much thought to how I would die --
Since leaving,
It's inevitable --
Stepping out into the open
Opened
A million ways, possibilities for the end --
Last week, I was rad-sick,
Now, I'm a group of raiders'
Captive.
This is day 3.
The rope has rubbed my skin raw,
Burning with every breath, every twitch --
But it's so close,
So close to fraying,
Freeing me --
Or at least
Giving me
A chance.
"Choice meat," they said --
Someone,
Something they would eat
Out, and then
Eat.
I’ve given too much fucking thought to how I would die --
I eyed my hurting ankle,
Told myself it was nothing --
Glared at the left behind shrapnel,
'Tis but a scratch,
As I scratched
The rope again against
Concrete --
Control the
Spiraling,
Why
Are
The tin cans
Chiming,
Bullets ri-
The door crashed open --
Sweet salvation.
A big sigh.
"Dammit, Janet."
I gave him a smile.
Summerrain75
Forum Posts: 373
Dangerous Mind
11
Joined 6th Jan 2019Forum Posts: 373
#27/30
April 27
Today is my brothers' birthday
They are twins born in 1977
One year, six months and seven days later
After my birth in 1975
My brothers and I belong
To generation X
Except for our youngest brother
Who was born in 1981
If all my siblings were alive
We would have been 11
A very big and happy family
Now only six of us are alive
My mother has two miscarriages
Our eldest sister was born in 1963
And died at a young age of 8
Next to her was our elder brother
Who also died at a very young age
We weren't born yet when they died
So we never met them
I only saw their picture
My sister has a short curly hair
A sad eyes and brown skin
She took after my mom
Whose hair was curly
I have a fairer skin tone
I can still remember vividly
How she looked like in that old picture
Which is gone a long time ago
I do not resemble her
Mother was a fertile woman
Who was blessed with many children
So unlike me who cannot bear a child
Because of my PCOS
Which led to my surgery in 2021
For total removal of my reproductive organ
Because of some complications
#28/30
Favorite
I was my grandma's favorite
Because I was the only girl
In the family
After my sister died at a young age
Who was ahead of me by 12 years
My grandma doted on me
She would bring me along
Wherever she go
She taught me how to dance
The "Pangalay" at a young age
Which is a traditional dance in our region
She was a lady
Of many talents
With a mind full of creativity
She knew how to crochet
Do embroidery
Bake cakes
Sew dresses
And made her own bags
If only I was serious
In learning those skills from her
I could have applied them
But I was young then
When she showed me how
To do those things
When I was a little girl
She would sew dresses for me
My mother rarely bought dresses
Because my grandma made them
When I grew up into a teen ager
She would not allow me
To have friends from the opposite sex
She wanted me to focus
On my studies
She was very strict
I have to be home right after classes
Sometimes she would wait
For me at the gate of our school
When I go home late
I am grateful to her
For her love and attention
Double posting due to
A mispost on a different challenge
April 27
Today is my brothers' birthday
They are twins born in 1977
One year, six months and seven days later
After my birth in 1975
My brothers and I belong
To generation X
Except for our youngest brother
Who was born in 1981
If all my siblings were alive
We would have been 11
A very big and happy family
Now only six of us are alive
My mother has two miscarriages
Our eldest sister was born in 1963
And died at a young age of 8
Next to her was our elder brother
Who also died at a very young age
We weren't born yet when they died
So we never met them
I only saw their picture
My sister has a short curly hair
A sad eyes and brown skin
She took after my mom
Whose hair was curly
I have a fairer skin tone
I can still remember vividly
How she looked like in that old picture
Which is gone a long time ago
I do not resemble her
Mother was a fertile woman
Who was blessed with many children
So unlike me who cannot bear a child
Because of my PCOS
Which led to my surgery in 2021
For total removal of my reproductive organ
Because of some complications
#28/30
Favorite
I was my grandma's favorite
Because I was the only girl
In the family
After my sister died at a young age
Who was ahead of me by 12 years
My grandma doted on me
She would bring me along
Wherever she go
She taught me how to dance
The "Pangalay" at a young age
Which is a traditional dance in our region
She was a lady
Of many talents
With a mind full of creativity
She knew how to crochet
Do embroidery
Bake cakes
Sew dresses
And made her own bags
If only I was serious
In learning those skills from her
I could have applied them
But I was young then
When she showed me how
To do those things
When I was a little girl
She would sew dresses for me
My mother rarely bought dresses
Because my grandma made them
When I grew up into a teen ager
She would not allow me
To have friends from the opposite sex
She wanted me to focus
On my studies
She was very strict
I have to be home right after classes
Sometimes she would wait
For me at the gate of our school
When I go home late
I am grateful to her
For her love and attention
Double posting due to
A mispost on a different challenge
dimpy
dimpsmoon
Forum Posts: 121
dimpsmoon
Dangerous Mind
4
Joined 9th Mar 2023 Forum Posts: 121
28/30
Battle
nothing will happen
by shedding tears
if the heart is black
it will remain black
if you keep increasing
your courage then
I will also hold the rudder
from tomorrow itself
we will quarrel
we will make a special bond
in the friendship
we will feel separation
you may maintain
enmity by your deeds,
but you have kept me
in your heart,
come let's see the
scene beyond the darkness too
people have lit the torch of hope
when the stomach of
selfish friends will be full
they will throw you in
the garbage
with the same intensity
with which you maintain enmity
I wish you had friendship
with that much intensity...
Battle
nothing will happen
by shedding tears
if the heart is black
it will remain black
if you keep increasing
your courage then
I will also hold the rudder
from tomorrow itself
we will quarrel
we will make a special bond
in the friendship
we will feel separation
you may maintain
enmity by your deeds,
but you have kept me
in your heart,
come let's see the
scene beyond the darkness too
people have lit the torch of hope
when the stomach of
selfish friends will be full
they will throw you in
the garbage
with the same intensity
with which you maintain enmity
I wish you had friendship
with that much intensity...
PoetsRevenge
Forum Posts: 749
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 30th June 2016Forum Posts: 749
28/30
Never Gone VI
you knew every level and how to meet it
rising to that challenge with panache
and a way of getting in with people
you don't how i really do miss you
sad moments were often lost on you
but I hope we can meet in a higher place
and relive those low ones in storied laughter
vivid and magnificent as you at your best.
And by the way, don't be afraid of the light,
be them brighter than those stage lights,
more welcoming then the hecklers
you've earned it..
65 uw
Never Gone VI
you knew every level and how to meet it
rising to that challenge with panache
and a way of getting in with people
you don't how i really do miss you
sad moments were often lost on you
but I hope we can meet in a higher place
and relive those low ones in storied laughter
vivid and magnificent as you at your best.
And by the way, don't be afraid of the light,
be them brighter than those stage lights,
more welcoming then the hecklers
you've earned it..
65 uw
Ahavati
Forum Posts: 14890
Tyrant of Words
117
Joined 11th Apr 2015Forum Posts: 14890
xxviii
Untitled
Stars float like dust
becoming a tableau
of mystique
in the hand we’re dealt
We innately know
there is room for change
reshuffle fate
believe in what can be
An ironwood soul
reverencing the Oracle
taking comfort
in all that surrounds
A bone-deep knowing
and shaking fingers
transcribe what fails
to emerge
as spoken words
But on the page
they assume shape
eels of Sumi ink
entwine as seaweed
their message
palpable in feeling
The Universe speaks
through the Earth
from every flower
and bird
cloud to sediment
It transmits our Song
in the form of a Poem
Untitled
Stars float like dust
becoming a tableau
of mystique
in the hand we’re dealt
We innately know
there is room for change
reshuffle fate
believe in what can be
An ironwood soul
reverencing the Oracle
taking comfort
in all that surrounds
A bone-deep knowing
and shaking fingers
transcribe what fails
to emerge
as spoken words
But on the page
they assume shape
eels of Sumi ink
entwine as seaweed
their message
palpable in feeling
The Universe speaks
through the Earth
from every flower
and bird
cloud to sediment
It transmits our Song
in the form of a Poem