Poems About Nature by Top Critiquers
#nature
Poems about nature by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Magnetic
The storm tonight
Creating Northern Lights
Creating Northern Lights
#nature
#storm
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Arrival of Summer
The summer comes steadily forward over lush fields
Coming my way like a guaranteed car crash
The summer rises in the sky like an incinerating beast
Breeding sleepless nights, sweat and madness
I sit in my hole and await the collision
Coming my way like a guaranteed car crash
The summer rises in the sky like an incinerating beast
Breeding sleepless nights, sweat and madness
I sit in my hole and await the collision
#metaphor
#nature
#spring #summer
#spring #summer
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Sunshiny Day
easy sorrow, today is a beautiful day
I understand your desire to paint things melancholy
but today I'm going to kiss the sky
and give reverence to the beauty I see
the garden flowers worship the sun
and the weeds too
the moist earth giving birth to seedlings
the trees so solemn
history is contained in their branches
they whisper quietly among themselves
hush now they may be telling you a secret
the dandelions a delight decorating the grass
everything in a symbiotic relationship with one another
the birds and...
I understand your desire to paint things melancholy
but today I'm going to kiss the sky
and give reverence to the beauty I see
the garden flowers worship the sun
and the weeds too
the moist earth giving birth to seedlings
the trees so solemn
history is contained in their branches
they whisper quietly among themselves
hush now they may be telling you a secret
the dandelions a delight decorating the grass
everything in a symbiotic relationship with one another
the birds and...
#trees
#flowers
#nature
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17 Comments
Afternoon
window
crouching
blinds wave
smell
of pine
and blossoms
crouching
blinds wave
smell
of pine
and blossoms
#nature
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The Fiddler
A flock of sailing fiddlers fly
Down flowing fountain in the sky
Seven-fold they fair my eye
As life so faintly passes by
Seven-fold the fearless fliers
Finger through the fiery breeze,
Symphonic plumage ever whiter
Feathered phantoms through the trees
Flying, flying, never dying
To each, the cool breeze pacifying
Fearless flying flocks of yore
Hear echoes off a fading shore
And tumble down as raindrops pour
Fearlessly flying never more.
Down flowing fountain in the sky
Seven-fold they fair my eye
As life so faintly passes by
Seven-fold the fearless fliers
Finger through the fiery breeze,
Symphonic plumage ever whiter
Feathered phantoms through the trees
Flying, flying, never dying
To each, the cool breeze pacifying
Fearless flying flocks of yore
Hear echoes off a fading shore
And tumble down as raindrops pour
Fearlessly flying never more.
#birds
#death
#nature #sky
#nature #sky
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Hyper Days
at times i'm hyper
smiling and high
as a kite on life
going outside
filling my lungs
& jump for joy
Days i enjoy
before i know
it they are over
& i slide into a
deep black pit
i'm not the most
stable lady in the
world i am really
unstable as f*ck
but it is the highs
that keep me alive
that drive me to go
& work harder to be
the best version of me
smiling and high
as a kite on life
going outside
filling my lungs
& jump for joy
Days i enjoy
before i know
it they are over
& i slide into a
deep black pit
i'm not the most
stable lady in the
world i am really
unstable as f*ck
but it is the highs
that keep me alive
that drive me to go
& work harder to be
the best version of me
#happiness
#nature
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8 Comments
Zenith of Zen
The crow perched at the crest of the tree.
Is in constant scrutiny of human monotony.
The robin wearing an auburn breast
hops along more casually.
The starling tucked in the leafy branch squawked.
Of his pipedream of being a hawk.
Life seems to just effortlessly transpire.
As if nothing is right and nothing is wrong.
Agonized thoughts seem a little less diar.
While nature's bursting with jubilant song.
When it hurts to be human,
Seek the natural world,
The zenith of zen.
Is in constant scrutiny of human monotony.
The robin wearing an auburn breast
hops along more casually.
The starling tucked in the leafy branch squawked.
Of his pipedream of being a hawk.
Life seems to just effortlessly transpire.
As if nothing is right and nothing is wrong.
Agonized thoughts seem a little less diar.
While nature's bursting with jubilant song.
When it hurts to be human,
Seek the natural world,
The zenith of zen.
#birds
#LifeStruggles
#nature #peace
#nature #peace
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19 Comments
Rose
Queen of the garden
Outshines all
Of her peers
Emitting a scent
as lovely
As she looks
Outshines all
Of her peers
Emitting a scent
as lovely
As she looks
#flowers
#rose
#nature
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THE SEVEN DAYS OF CREATION
See Genesis Chapters 1 and 2 verses 1-7.
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
#nature
#God
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
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5 Comments
Snail Mom?
She loves fiercely and with abandon
No favorites, they’re all adored
Big or small each one has their own special place in her heart
Treading lovingly, collecting shells
Natures fuel and healing power
Earth mother gently nourishing her offspring with such tenderness
Wait!
What?
She said, “I’m a Snail mom”
I said, “Huh?”
🐌
No favorites, they’re all adored
Big or small each one has their own special place in her heart
Treading lovingly, collecting shells
Natures fuel and healing power
Earth mother gently nourishing her offspring with such tenderness
Wait!
What?
She said, “I’m a Snail mom”
I said, “Huh?”
🐌
#friendship
#healing
#love #nature
#love #nature
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23 Comments
SCHOOLED BY A SPARROW
BIRDS
I have a
bird feeder
on my balcony
that I continually
keep filled
with seed.
Today as I
watched my friend
come for the
seed he knows
will be there,
I thought how
simple life would be
if we humans would
trust each other and
share the blessings
we have.
Today I was once
again schooled by
a sparrow.
What lesson will
you let nature teach you
TODAY?
I have a
bird feeder
on my balcony
that I continually
keep filled
with seed.
Today as I
watched my friend
come for the
seed he knows
will be there,
I thought how
simple life would be
if we humans would
trust each other and
share the blessings
we have.
Today I was once
again schooled by
a sparrow.
What lesson will
you let nature teach you
TODAY?
#animals
#birds
#nature
236 reads
7 Comments
lilac kisses
spring is a flirtatious vixen
eager to sow her precious seeds
& experience a world barely awakening
she dares burst forth
...so full of life...
while snow still blankets the earth
coy little crocuses shoving impatiently through
splashes of purples...yellows...& blues
exuberant & anxious to show her potential
she flaunts her prominent belly
glowing with her fertile beauty
as she births flora & fauna alike
a new year has been born
with all her children gathered at her feet
decadently spawning every color...
eager to sow her precious seeds
& experience a world barely awakening
she dares burst forth
...so full of life...
while snow still blankets the earth
coy little crocuses shoving impatiently through
splashes of purples...yellows...& blues
exuberant & anxious to show her potential
she flaunts her prominent belly
glowing with her fertile beauty
as she births flora & fauna alike
a new year has been born
with all her children gathered at her feet
decadently spawning every color...
#happiness
#nature
#spring
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10 Comments
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