Life Cycle Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#LifeCycle
In Abyssum
There's a chasm of the heart.
Darkness at the edge.
A fall will tear you apart.
The shadows pirouette down your path with Darkness Razor in hand.
The journey meant to spit you out.
Remnants of Man.
The gravity of this voyage seemingly transcends time.
As the emptiness fills.
So does the chill.
Slowly will you burst into Frost.
Of course after you're killed.
Before that, sing us a song no one will hear.
You too.
A shadow,
Razor in hand.
Your consciousness violently pirouettes.
All seemingly...
Darkness at the edge.
A fall will tear you apart.
The shadows pirouette down your path with Darkness Razor in hand.
The journey meant to spit you out.
Remnants of Man.
The gravity of this voyage seemingly transcends time.
As the emptiness fills.
So does the chill.
Slowly will you burst into Frost.
Of course after you're killed.
Before that, sing us a song no one will hear.
You too.
A shadow,
Razor in hand.
Your consciousness violently pirouettes.
All seemingly...
#LifeCycle
#death
#philosophical #scary
#philosophical #scary
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Chiaroscuro
Depth to every print left.
Even the ones frictioned away.
life bounces like light.
Resolute are the rays.
The quality of one, shared upon All.
Resolute rays shine upon All.
May they suppress the void inside.
To aid us to good will when the sun hides.
As you leave a print for time to test
Take your next steps always as to be the best.
Covers thrown to cast dark on the light of Me.
I seek to find the light in the dark of We!
A journey indeed.
Even the ones frictioned away.
life bounces like light.
Resolute are the rays.
The quality of one, shared upon All.
Resolute rays shine upon All.
May they suppress the void inside.
To aid us to good will when the sun hides.
As you leave a print for time to test
Take your next steps always as to be the best.
Covers thrown to cast dark on the light of Me.
I seek to find the light in the dark of We!
A journey indeed.
#humankind
#LifeCycle
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7.83
I’m colored 7.83 that’s an earth tone
For the evils in my mind I’m
Making wards with these cursed stones
Tryin to grind til shine like I can afford my birthstone
just a sign of the times I’ll get mine til my
Hearse comes
And I’ll Smile through the pain I wont say that
It hurts though
I just play in the rain dry my feet where the
Dirt blows
And the concrete greets my light at each burnt sole
While the burnt coal of my heart
heats my whole damn world slow as
the beat of my blood mixing love til it’s purple
It’s all love,...
For the evils in my mind I’m
Making wards with these cursed stones
Tryin to grind til shine like I can afford my birthstone
just a sign of the times I’ll get mine til my
Hearse comes
And I’ll Smile through the pain I wont say that
It hurts though
I just play in the rain dry my feet where the
Dirt blows
And the concrete greets my light at each burnt sole
While the burnt coal of my heart
heats my whole damn world slow as
the beat of my blood mixing love til it’s purple
It’s all love,...
#LifeCycle
#patience
#rebirth
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Collage 140 Z14 Industrial Art & Design
#collage
#art
#nyc
#artist
#lower east side
#barrio
#industrial
#power
#bold
#boxheads
#gouache
#recycled cardboard
#lightweight
#heavyweight
#full stop
#art
#nyc
#artist
#lower east side
#barrio
#industrial
#power
#bold
#boxheads
#gouache
#recycled cardboard
#lightweight
#heavyweight
#full stop
#art
#identity
#LifeCycle
#power
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Positivity will help you & others
Smiling for myself
Pleasure is what you create
Only one life to give
Pleasure is what you create
Only one life to give
#haiku
#happiness
#LifeCycle
#motivational
#uplifting
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Guide me to the nearest Gene Pool
If I decided to piss in the gene pool,
would a new genetic variant be created?
Maybe my genetics would create a new species or a hybrid
Anything is an improvement of what currently resides on this planet
would a new genetic variant be created?
Maybe my genetics would create a new species or a hybrid
Anything is an improvement of what currently resides on this planet
#LifeCycle
#satirical
#science
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april songs (Theme 3): Attitudes of Life 10
april song 30—all my life (punto finale)
were all my days renumbered as the grains
of sand that on the ocean fringes pine,
i wonder what would be my remnant gains,
ere vibrant youth yields to life’s swift decline.
would all my lyrics wither with the dawn,
to cadence like the sacrificial fawn?
were all my life the lyrics of one poem
—a ballad of engaging latitude—
whose metaphors compelled bright stars to know ’em,
would death accord a lither attitude
to destinies my journey must fulfil
before earth silence...
were all my days renumbered as the grains
of sand that on the ocean fringes pine,
i wonder what would be my remnant gains,
ere vibrant youth yields to life’s swift decline.
would all my lyrics wither with the dawn,
to cadence like the sacrificial fawn?
were all my life the lyrics of one poem
—a ballad of engaging latitude—
whose metaphors compelled bright stars to know ’em,
would death accord a lither attitude
to destinies my journey must fulfil
before earth silence...
#dreams
#LifeCycle
#LifeStruggles
#NaPoWriMo2024
#SelfDiscovery
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Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
On the seventh day
Poetspeak rested
From posting sex poems that is
Instead there is art
The day is still young however
Artists are known for excess
So
Stay tuned
You never know ….
Poetspeak rested
From posting sex poems that is
Instead there is art
The day is still young however
Artists are known for excess
So
Stay tuned
You never know ….
#art
#identity
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
#sex
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As I Lay
I never thought I would die so soon
This world for me
Was nothing extravagant, nothing over the
moon
This was never my forever home, only
temporary.
You see, a sinner lies in this ground
I didn't deserve any kind of Heaven
Although my Jesus died for me on that
mound
At times His voice I could not hear, the
noise did deafen.
I hope and pray
My legacy lives on
I did the best that I could in my own way
I loved well, worked hard and with Jesus I
made a bond.
So as my body turns to ash ...
This world for me
Was nothing extravagant, nothing over the
moon
This was never my forever home, only
temporary.
You see, a sinner lies in this ground
I didn't deserve any kind of Heaven
Although my Jesus died for me on that
mound
At times His voice I could not hear, the
noise did deafen.
I hope and pray
My legacy lives on
I did the best that I could in my own way
I loved well, worked hard and with Jesus I
made a bond.
So as my body turns to ash ...
#death
#LifeCycle
#love
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april songs (Theme 3): attitudes of life 7
april song 27—all my friends
the company i keep close to my breast
may hang about my neck—a human noose
that prematurely speeds my earthly rest,
unless, discretely, i should learn to choose
who occupies peripheral back seat
or dwells within my innermost retreat.
not all my friends may all my secrets share,
though many may pretend to wish me well.
too oft a circle morphs into a square,
exploding like a virtual bombshell.
may all my true friends glory in the thought
that i will love them, always, as i ought.
©...
the company i keep close to my breast
may hang about my neck—a human noose
that prematurely speeds my earthly rest,
unless, discretely, i should learn to choose
who occupies peripheral back seat
or dwells within my innermost retreat.
not all my friends may all my secrets share,
though many may pretend to wish me well.
too oft a circle morphs into a square,
exploding like a virtual bombshell.
may all my true friends glory in the thought
that i will love them, always, as i ought.
©...
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#NaPoWriMo2024 #SelfDiscovery
#NaPoWriMo2024 #SelfDiscovery
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april songs (Theme 3): attitudes of life 1
april song 21—all my fears
some days i hide behind my pillow, scared
of phantoms that have mocked my life and jeered.
i tremble when cold night begins to creep
into the quiet recess of my sleep.
for shapes and sounds are not what they appear:
their minion songs and dances are severe.
but bogeyman shall die a sudden death,
for i shall strangulate his parting breath.
my father says his substance is surreal:
gross emptiness is easy to repeal.
tonight, i shall be waiting in my bed
to show him who’s alive and...
some days i hide behind my pillow, scared
of phantoms that have mocked my life and jeered.
i tremble when cold night begins to creep
into the quiet recess of my sleep.
for shapes and sounds are not what they appear:
their minion songs and dances are severe.
but bogeyman shall die a sudden death,
for i shall strangulate his parting breath.
my father says his substance is surreal:
gross emptiness is easy to repeal.
tonight, i shall be waiting in my bed
to show him who’s alive and...
#anxiety
#fear
#LifeCycle
#NaPoWriMo2024
#night
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april songs (Theme 2): elements of life 10
april song 20—light (finale)
"For God, who commanded the light to shine out of darkness, hath
shined in our hearts, to give the light of the knowledge of the glory of
God in the face of Jesus Christ."—2nd Corinthians 4:4
'tis the wonder of all wonders
that the spirit of man ponders:
is there life in utter darkness?
is there peace where dwells no kindness?
'tis a world rife with disaster,
when the dark becomes our master;
his blindfold is meant to strangle
knave and saint who with him...
"For God, who commanded the light to shine out of darkness, hath
shined in our hearts, to give the light of the knowledge of the glory of
God in the face of Jesus Christ."—2nd Corinthians 4:4
'tis the wonder of all wonders
that the spirit of man ponders:
is there life in utter darkness?
is there peace where dwells no kindness?
'tis a world rife with disaster,
when the dark becomes our master;
his blindfold is meant to strangle
knave and saint who with him...
#environment
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeCycle #NaPoWriMo2024
#LifeCycle #NaPoWriMo2024
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